UIR: Starfighter Versus Superman by Temporal Dave

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Comments for UIR: Starfighter Versus Superman by Temporal Dave (http://www.comics2film.com/DCG/DispArt.php3?f_id=19803)

[Le Pijon]

Nice! It's great to see you doing full scenes. Apparently, the thumb war didn't settle things between these two. :) Great action and humor. There's alot of good things workin' here. IMO, there's just a couple of minor details.... Starfighter seems to be moving and punching straight forward so Superman should be traveling straight backward and should be a couple of feet higher and Starfighter's thumb appears to be in front of his fingers on his punching hand and should be along side. Still, it's great stuff and I hope we'll be seeing more full scenes!

[Temporal Dave]

Thanks for the professional analysis man. I'm glad you appreciate my extra efforts.
On your details, Starfighter is flying in with his follow-up punch - after already putting Supes through the wall with the first one. Hopefully if you look at it with that in mind it makes more visual sense.
As for the odd thumb position - you're absolutely right, and it's been bugging me since I submitted it.
I'm glad that you're checking out my pics thoroughly enough that you would pick up on it. Cheers again Pijon.

[Le Pijon]

Ahh, indeed it does make sense to me now. Eh, the thumb's a minor detail most would probably miss; it's still a very strong picture. Oh, yeah! I love your stuff, Dave and always take a very close and analytical look!