UIR: christophear by christophear

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Comments for UIR: christophear by christophear (http://www.comics2film.com/DCG/DispArt.php3?f_id=20181)

[effektdmentality]

you might wanna change the title of your piece. you have your username as your title. no problems though. :D

anyhoo, nice piece. not many art notes, so i can't critique anything other than what i see. nice warping of the cross on her bustline, though it is kinda obvious that all the crosses, especially the knee ones, were copied from the same one (either her belt or her arm). my best suggestion is start with really big source photo's and shrink them down when you're done; that way, everything may start out blurry but end up smaller and tighter. the hood also looks a little flat, i'd suggest darkening where her head meets the hood to make it look more like her head is going into it; right now, it kinda looks like a bonnet. nice work adding in the cape. and logo, though i'd clean up the bottom and lower right corners. otherwise, a nice one. :)

[SPIDERFAN]

Looks pretty good! And don't feel bad about being a 28 year old madman. Try 35 years old and counting! keep up the good work and creating.

spiderfan