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08-21-2006, 12:38 PM
Comments for UIR: One Line by Shade the Mystic (http://www.comics2film.com/DCG/DispArt.php3?f_id=20771)
08-21-2006, 12:40 PM
Holy shyte ! This is awesome. I like your approach on the Lizard, but what really kicks my ace is the Hulk-version of Rhyno. Great job !
08-21-2006, 03:52 PM
This is AWSOME! Thats pretty much all I can say about it. All the characters are spot on and look great, and your style is perfect. Cant wait to see the next one.
08-22-2006, 05:48 PM
Aw, crap. You may hate me for this review, Shade so I'll apologize in advance for turning One Line into a bad one liner.
First, the good news... your technique is constantly improving at an impressive rate and I really love the direction you've been going in. Your exaggerated characters look great and have style to spare. You've also been taking on a lot more characters in each image and for the most part, doing exceedingly well at it.
The small problem is the right side of the image where Rhino's hand is cut off. The larger problem relates to character positioning. Having done a number of pictures with more than a few characters myself, I know this can be a tricky problem to figure out. So anyway, as we're hearing Spidey's dialogue, he's um...bent over and looking away from rather than toward the rogues gallery. This makes it look like they're all staring at Spidey's barebacked posterior which could give Spidey's dialogue um... a very different context. :oops:
This is a beautifully drawn piece yet it really shows the importance of getting your character positioning right.
Shade the Mystic
08-22-2006, 11:09 PM
OMG :oops: You're right, Spidey's "presenting" himself to them! Oh...hell, never even noticed that.
Um...well....who am I to judge what Peter wants in life, right?
At least this means a tamale like MJ is on the market again.
But still, I think this makes up for the last few crappy pics I put in. Although you're right, Rhino's hand has taken a mysterious sabbatical from the rest of his body....maybe it got eaten by a wormhole or something?
But originally, I was going to put in a lot more, and have them completely surround Spidey, but....well, let's just say there's a very good reason I haven't submitted a Carnage piece yet. And why nobody ever does Hydroman. Ever.
And don't worry about me hating you, Pij- be honest, even if it hurts. How else am I going to learn and improve?
08-23-2006, 11:43 AM
Glad you took my review well, Shade. I'm only trying to be helpful but sometimes it's hard to know how someone will take criticism. Like I said, your stuff's been looking great lately. BTW, I didn't find your last pics the least bit "crappy" :) perhaps not quite at the higher level of One Line but good none the less.
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