A chilling story about a murder....

[Immortal1982]

I picked this up from another site.
http://imagechan.org/img/images/confession.jpg

[Bill_the_Pony]

http://a293.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/27/m_95e133dc5debd9d76b7e68318d6f3a8c.gif

[Jakester]

Ya know, Luke, just 'cuz you ain't died yet don' mean you's immortal.

[spammityspam]

That was FABULOUS.

[Gentlemen Death]

Thats Fresh.....:cool:


Here is one:


Christine got out of the car and closed the door,"Goodnight, Tom."
Tom turned his head and leaned forward,"Hey before you go come over to my side of the door....I want to say goodbye..."

Christine walked around the front of the car and to the drivers side window,"Yes?"
Tom opened up the door and brought forth a huge curved hook. Before Christine has the chance to realize what it is, Tom punches her in the face, knocking her unconcious.

4 minutes later.....

Christine woke up to her lying in the middle of a deserted alleyway with her legs spread open and Tom standing above her. She tried to move and realized that she could not move anything from her neck down.

"I thought you might want to try and get away.....So I decided to make sure you would not be in a hurry." Tom knelt down, and licked the side of her cheek.

"Get away from me you sick, fuck!" Christine screamed, tears rolling down her face.

"All in good time, madam." Tom stood up and walked back to his car which was at the dead end of the alley, facing toward her.

Christine follows Tom with her eyes and watches him kneel down in front of the car and hears some metal noises clanking together, making an eerie sound.

"What are you doing....Why cant you just let me GO!" She screams again.

The scream seems to not even fase Tom as he enters his car. Christine looks to where he was kneeling and sees the curved hook that she had caught a glimpse of before Tom knocked her out.

Tom gets into the car and starts the engine. Before Christine realizes what is happening the car lunges forward at top speed. Christine begins to scream and trys to wiggle herself out of numbness.

The car hits 55mph before the hook rips Christine in half from the bottom up. Blood sprayed the underbelly of the car and some peices of flesh got caught in the grill, before he even heard the crunch of her mangled body.

Tom came to a speading holt, and slowly got out of the car. He walked over to what was left of the two halfs and lit up a cigerette.

"Whores never get a second chance.....God...I love that line..."

The End......?


Yeah...It might be stupid but it was a spur of the moment story...I hope you are disgusted and think less of me...Enjoy. :D

[Sgt. Awesome]

I liked the first story better...

[Gentlemen Death]

Thank you! :D