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trekkie
07-17-2003, 11:44 AM
This is my first UIR so bear with me:

Daredevil: Yellow by joker21 - Only question is why? Daredevil wasn't my favorite movie, but I liked it. As for the pic, pretty ok. I think you missed a spot or two.

X3: Logan - Mutant Vs Metal REDUX by localhero-Wonderful as always. Really great redo. It would be interesting to see Wolverine with his bone claws one of these days...

ArMeD NiNjA by morph - Kinda small, but I can still see that you've paid great attention to the small details and the overall design of the costume.

: Bday Gift July 13: The Vamp Pimp by Lady D - Very nice, blended very seamlessly. Great work. Happy birthday RyanArya!

Clark and his adopted cousin Linda by kidofsteel - The overall design is pretty good, but take a little more time on the coloring, it can add a lot to a picture.

Homage to Arthur Adams by tattman00 - Wow! I wish I could draw like that. Really great. Were you using a reference pic at all?

Cheetah by Captain Wonder - Simple but effective. I would like to see a larger version sometime in the future. I'm not familiar with the character, but some [likely] details like fangs or something would be nice.

Jem by Gawd - Good job witht the recoloring. I do belive you also redid the tattoo, very good there.

GI Joe Cover Contest Submission #2 by burningsegments - Pretty darn good. I really like Cobra with the globe.

ROCKIN` BAT colored by dark angel - Great job. I need to learn how to color half decent. Keep going, you've got quite a talent there.

COVEN SPELLCASTER by crash - Nice. Looks a little painted, but very good overall. I'd like to see a pic with more of the costume from the example (gloves, jacket, etc.)

GI Joe Cover Contest by Master Thespian - wow. These GI Joe pieces are all really great. Great shading and attention to details. Have you thought about Epic?

The Creator by trekkie - I'm not going to say alot about my own piece. It needs work, but pretty good for a first time.

Green & Gray - Hulk II poster concept by swingerbone - Really great job. I love the concept. Great work!

WW Screen Test: Karen Cliche by Captain Sigma - Pretty good. Some of the gold doesn't look natural, but it's better than I could do.

G.I.Joe the great group by ezequiel - I tell ya, it's a good thing I'm not doing the GI Joe contest because I would be easily slaughtered. Really good job. The shading is really good.

Jedi Knight Pas-Jo D
07-17-2003, 05:29 PM
UIR To come soon for this update....must do work first...

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dperceful
07-17-2003, 05:37 PM
uir

dd yellow: how would a yellow costume improve a movie? you need to get all of the image, there are still portions of red showing. why not do the whole image?

x3: looks good to me. i like the lighting match up. claws look good to me, i like the texture.

armed nija: kinda small.

vamp pimp: great frankensteining. his pants seems a little weird, i think its the color. great work as always.

clark and his...: what do you use to color, it looks like a combo of a marker and a crayon. clean up the edges.

homage to art adams: that wolverine is sweet looking, love to see a colored version.

cheetah: try a fur effect on the face, rather than just a yellow face and black dots.

jem: nice purple hair. who knew jem had such a fan base?

gi cover 2: i like the tighter lines. cobra commander looks great.

rockin bat: nice color job. i like how you got the image to pop with the highlights and shadows. the muscles on the legs are great.

spellcaster: nice work. i would soften up the wrinkles and blend them just a touch. this is still awesome looking, great work. maybe whiten up the hair.

gi cover: nice. i like the inked version. great work.

the creator: cool. you missed a line on his right shoulder. looks neat, nice work.

green and grey: i hope they realize the secret to the next movie is more hulk. nice lettering. i like the concept, let's see what they do for a sequel.

ww screen test: is that her real hair? i haven't seen hair that high since a whitesnake concert in 1990. i would smooth out your shadow and highlight lines, by blurring them i think they would blend better.

great group: wow those are a great group! nice layout. good inking.

dperceful

Jedi Knight Pas-Jo D
07-17-2003, 06:42 PM
Partial UIR...rest to come later...

Daredevil: Yellow by joker21-I take it by the artists notes that you didn’t like the movie…next time, remove the copyright info, just use the clone stamp.

X3: Logan - Mutant Vs Metal Redux by localhero-I love it, my only 2 nit pics are thus:find a better body in the background(he looks stiff, when in fact he should be limp…no sex jokes please, guys…), and second, you need to match Logan’s bluryness with the background bluryness. GREAT JOB ON THE BLOOD!!!!

: Bday Gift July 13: The Vamp Pimp by Lady D-coolness…shadows on the wall are a little harsh tho…

Homage To Arthur Adams by tattman00-love the full costume logan, but the hair on the upper right pic is not the correct angle.

Cheetah by Captain Wonder –WAAAYYY to small….

Jem by Gawd-perfect color change, and nice job on the tattoo.

Gi Joe Cover Contest Submission #2 by burningsegments-I like the animated look of it.

Rockin` Bat Colored by dark angel –that’s one buff bat!


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Jedi Knight Pas-Jo D
07-17-2003, 08:58 PM
Ok, time to finish that UIR...

Coven Spellcaster by crash- GREAT Costume work, but blur the edges a little bit.

Gi Joe Cover Contest by Master Thespian-perfect inking job.

The Creator by trekkie -Stan IS the man!

Green & Gray - Hulk Ii Poster Concept by swingerbone -good concept and well put together, after you switch the Hulk to grey scale to create The Grey Hulk, add color to the eyes and teeth.

Ww Screen Test: Karen Cliche by Captain Sigma-the rope needs some work to make it look looped around, at this point it looks like one solid piece, and watch out for the original background in the hair, other then that, good job.

G.i.joe The Great Group by ezequiel-mmmm....big bosum....

And I'm out....

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swingerbone
07-17-2003, 10:32 PM
<BLOCKQUOTE><font size="1" face="Verdana, Arial">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by Jedi Knight Pas-Jo Dacle:
<B>Green & Gray - Hulk Ii Poster Concept by swingerbone -good concept and well put together, after you switch the Hulk to grey scale to create The Grey Hulk, add color to the eyes and teeth.
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Yeah... I shoulda added red to his gums and blood vessels in the eye... if you notice I did do it on the close-up

Thanks for the kind comments everyone!



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joker21
07-17-2003, 10:46 PM
<BLOCKQUOTE><font size="1" face="Verdana, Arial">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by dperceful:
<B>uir

dd yellow: how would a yellow costume improve a movie?

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*sigh* I meant that they should have made DD: Yellow instead of the "movie" they made.


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dperceful
07-18-2003, 10:30 AM
<BLOCKQUOTE><font size="1" face="Verdana, Arial">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by joker21:
*sigh* I meant that they should have made DD: Yellow instead of the "movie" they made.<HR></BLOCKQUOTE>

ohhhh.

dark angel
07-21-2003, 01:08 AM
ROCKIN` BAT colored by dark angel - Great job. I need to learn how to color half decent. Keep going, you've got quite a talent there.

thanks for the compliment man! i thought no one notices my artwork but,thanks once again for the compliment! http://www.comics2film.com/UBB/biggrin.gif

localhero
07-21-2003, 01:31 AM
most pics get a comment..

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Cheers, Local
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"So let me fill my children's hearts, With heroes tales and hope it starts, A fire in them so deeds are done, With no vain sighs for moments gone."

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[This message has been edited by localhero (edited 07-21-2003).]

localhero
07-22-2003, 04:46 PM
Daredevil: Yellow - joker21: This one screams laziness at me, compared to some of your other recolors recently, this one is just sloppy. You also should have been able to find a much cleaner base image for that pose.. They are all over the web. I think if they do do Daredevil: Yellow, they would have to use the concept that his costume was made from his dad's boxing robe, I think you should have tried to get that feeling across.**

Homage to Arthur Adams - tattman00: Ahh.. It's nice to see wolvie back in one of the classic costumes. Clean lines nice shading on the upper body although the legs seem a bit plain***

GI Joe Entries - various: All really standout pieces. The layouts are cool and the workmanship is excellent..more to make the judges work for their money****

Rockin' Bat Colored - dark angel: nice work. It is pretty amazing what a little experimenting will uncover isn't it. I would encourage everyone to just mess about with effects and filters for at least 5 mins every day***

Green & Gray - Hulk II poster concept - swingerbone: great work as ever. The concept is good and well executed. I think someone already mentioned gums and eyes in the smaller hulks.. Apart from that nothing wrong at all I can see****


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Cheers, Local
"Is it true what they say about guys with big feet? Yes they do need big shoes."

"So let me fill my children's hearts, With heroes tales and hope it starts, A fire in them so deeds are done, With no vain sighs for moments gone."

See what sort of mood i'm in.. (http://www.localhero.org.uk/journal/)