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dperceful
08-28-2003, 05:08 PM
uir

worlds finest: love to see something original and colored. also maybe a different style....your obviously gifted...just would like to see different things from you. and oh yeah, didnt you already submit this?

todays: http://www.comics2film.com/DCG/DispArt.php3?f_id=13074&f_ssn=

the other one: http://www.comics2film.com/DCG/DispArt.php3?f_id=11160&f_ssn=


fathom: clean up the edges a touch. i see a little bit of pixelation. i like the see-thru arm.

wonderboy: a bit painty for my taste, but along the tenacious d style.

namor: looks nice to me. the ears are well done.

beetlemania: simple, but it works.

she hulk: nice model. i would work on tinting the skin better. yeah she is green, but its just a simple change of color. highlight and shade the skin slightly to really give the skin different green tones as opposed to the tint. it's a common mistake when doing a she hulk, mystique, or someone with another skin just to toss the color on....go the extra mile and make it really look like they have a different skin color.

gambit: make the lines follow the curvature of the face.

last son: the s really stands out more than the rest of the image, which isn't bad, it just doesn't look to be a part of the costume. i like the rubberized look.

natasha: very nice. what size waist is that .5? nice work...really like the character design.

harlequin: not as crisp as your others in the series. i could see how the pose gives you some problems.

jessica simpson: nice blue color. i like the overall look. nice hint with the text. i never realized how many costume incarnations she has been thru until after i submitted my invisible woman piece.

hal jordan: wow! one of my favorite dc characters, looks awesome. i love the greens and the whole power feel. nice job using AutoFX Mystical Lighting, highly overrated filter, but you got good results here with it. great work again.

the thing: really great face! wow, nice work. that face is awesome!

cable: nice metal on the arm...don't know if i agree with the solarized/inverted body.

young witch: looks nice. i like all of the colors. maybe get some smoother lines on the bottom of her top. really great work though...nice looking fabric.

voodoo: nice work at a full costume. i would work at making more lighting and shading that way the costume conforms more to the body.
dperceful

[This message has been edited by dperceful (edited 08-28-2003).]

Solid Snake
08-28-2003, 05:22 PM
Thank dperc i really appreciate it!

Miss Jellybrain
08-30-2003, 09:37 AM
Just a quick uir. I'm in a hurry.

World's Finest by Superman20
I like your shading here, but like dperceful said, a bit more originality wouldn't hurt.

Fathom by lamor112
The arm looks pretty nice, and I like the fact that you've tried to add some lighting (I hardly ever bother!). you could've tried to smooth her skin a bit and change her clothing.

Wonderboy by CJMylentz
i haven't heard that song, but this is pretty funny still.

NAMOR the sub-mariner by PSYCOLIPTIC
Drooool. A+

Beetlemania by Kombat Wombat
I don't really get it but i guess it works.

The Sensational She-Hulk, relaxing as only she can by KyleDasan
The top looks a bit flat and you could smooth her skin a bit. Other than that not bad.

Jeff as Gambit by rockajimmy
Not bad. I like the cards on the background.

Last Son by Zortech Industrial
Cool costume design. I think the yellows look a bit cheesy but i guess that's just me...

Beautiful Natasha by Spiderman620815
Skinny, but nice. I like her face.

Titans Swimsuit Special: Harlequin by Nathauan13
Very nice. Cool hair and costume.

Jessica Simpson Invisible Girl by Ed Hopkins
Great as always. Ecspecially the costume looks really neat.

Hal Jordan by marcushislop
Awesome! Spiffy!

The Thing by Solid Snake
Wow. I love the way how've done the musculature, and the face is great. He really looks like he's been carved of stone.

Cable by coven
Not bad. Nice job with all the additions one his face and the arm looks good enough. You could try adding some wrinkles to his shirt.

Young Witch by Atomic Man
Very nice. The top looks great. Nice job with the rest of her costume as well.

Voodoo by lenore_deloncre
Nice uniform, now it just needs a bit more defenition.

lenore_deloncre
08-31-2003, 06:29 AM
thanks for the tips guys, I'll keep them in mind when I redo it, and for the other costumes.

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Solid Snake
08-31-2003, 12:27 PM
Thanks alot, I appreciate. And if anyone has any ideas for waht to draw next, please do tell.