12/08/03 UIR

[dperceful]

uir, gonna be quick. gotta crash course learn illustrator for a job.

x3: what application do you use? one of us can help you out with image size if you maybe give us some insight into your application of choice. you did a decent job of putting the images together. your lighting is jumbled, but for the most part nice work.

ww: pixely, but a cute model. i would work on finding a cleaner base image. also if your going to use the same pic of the tiara, clean it up nice for repeated use.

Ra's Al Ghul: nice work on the hair. really nothing else to add.

conan: eyes look funky, too far apart. a better scan would be nice.

firefly: love the wings. with the way the background is i could see some slime and stuff on the bars.

domino: could use a little more something. just seems a shame to slap a black eye on and call it domino.

the joker: very cool. creepy insane look is there. the hair comes across a little fuzzy, but it doesn't take away form a great piece.

mystique: great work, favorite pic of the day. the blues are gorgeous. the detail on the walls and the smoke is well done. nice work on the pants.

daredevil2: maybe try adding some highlights and shadows to mary to achieve some depth. funny concept.

black cat: your best work yet. without using bevels on the body it all looks so much better. i wouldn't augment the breasts like you did, if you want to make them bigger use the liquify filter, and set it to bloat.

savage dragon: great rework on the hulk. great work on the face. the gun is a little weird, but the piece works well.

men of jla: cool concept. would definitely work as a gq cover.

transformers: anything with generation one transformers is cool. love to see unicron in the background. great work on megatron.

nolan's batman: batman's head looks gigantic. is this supposed to have an old time feel to it, the b/w sure gives it that effect.

invisible woman: nice work. i would say more, but i'm pretty sure your just using paint...so there is not much more to add.

elektra and dd: very cool. i like the kinda youger look to the characters. elektra is very well done, as is the rain effect. maybe toss in a sai or two.

dperceful

[This message has been edited by dperceful (edited 12-09-2003).]

[B]

Might as well do one of these too...

X3 Cast by siddhartha
Pretty good, though it is a bit small. And the lighting doesn't match.

Sophie Ellis Bextor As Ww by glrayner
Very pixelly. The gold bits look good, though. And the model is indeed definitely cute.

Ra's Al Ghul by Sonic1002
Very nice. Awesome casting. The hair dye's really well done. He's missing his facial hair, though.

Conan by bhandwerk
Looks good, but a better scan would be nice. Oh, and his eyes seem a bit too far apart. (Yeah, I know, nag nag nag.)

Rpg Concept: Firefly by localhero
Great work, as always, though the background is rather obviously a corridor rather than a prison cell. The wings are awesome.

Domino by show_u_who_i_am
What Dan said. Could use something more.

The Joker by uzazil
Really cool. My only nit is that the hair seems a bit blurry and smudgy. And a more interesting background would be cool. Nonetheless, great job.

Mystique by bullsik
Yeah, I think this is my favourite pic of the day too. Great drawing, great colours, great textures on the wall and floor. Awesome job!

Daredevil 2 by M
It lacks depth, like Dan said. Anything with Typhoid's cool though. I think we need more art with Typhoid. http://www.comics2film.com/UBB/wink.gif

Black Cat by bcat75
Quite good and, indeed, your best work to date. The breasts do look somewhat off, and you need to be more careful when you change colours--you dyed part of her scalp white here!

Savage Dragon by ali786
Good stuff. The head looks great. The construction of the gun is weird though... it doesn't really look like a real weapon.

The Men Of The Jla by cinorm
Welcome to the DCG. I like the concept. The colouring's a bit messy in spots--ie GL's arm. And some of their faces look weird, like Aquaman and MMH.

Transformers by Powermaster Jazz
So what's with this universal fetish for Transformers everyone has nowadays? http://www.comics2film.com/UBB/wink.gif Great pic, but rather too pixelated.

Nolan's Batman by cody
Batman's head is not so much enormous as bizarrely misshappen. I do like the colour scheme, though the composition is a bit lacking.

The Invisible Woman by M
Nice but, again, lacks depth. How'd you get two pics in one update though?

Elektra & Daredevil by daekazu
Awesome. Both characters look great, especially Elektra, and the rain in the background's really well done. However DD does seem a bit, I dunno, stretched.

[dperceful]

just a bump, i edited and added a few comments here and there.

dperceful

[ali786]

thanks for the comments..yeah the gun was abit of a problem..tried putting a real gun in but something seemed wrong with the scale or something so I ended up just making one from scratch but I was concentrating more on the character so ..thats my excuse

[localhero]

thanks for the comments.. I never said it was a prison cell though I believe.. just an abandoned prison.. I do wish I had corroded the bars a bit though now that you mention it.. ah well.. live and learn

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[Powermaster Jazz]

I posted another version of Transformers which is better quality. Its a little smaller in size but clearer. And that's Cybertron in the background in its Golden Age not Unicron.
I also have manipulations coming so keep a look out.