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Junkyard
10-14-2004, 09:50 PM
Ain't Nobody Better by MaidenRaine1300- Another interesting concept.

Scarlet Witch by Majik1387- An interesting mix of styles in this piece. The eyes look especially good, I think.

Bloodstorm by DarkElektraPhoenix- Had forgotten about her! Nice drawing. Better proportions and color than your previous pictures, I think.

Jsa 6 by MysticMorgan- Another one of those spectacular "unfinished pieces." You sir, raise the bar.


Jack In The Box - Astro City by QuantumFX- Cool, some Astro City stuff! Very nice.

Arch Enemies: Part 4 by Junkyard- Hmmm. Looking at it again, is that Senior W guy offensive? If so, my apologies.

Lsh - Dawnstar by MilleniumBum- Very nice. Best costume redisign I;ve seen in a while.

Originalconcept: Hex by show_u_who_i_am- Neat concept, nice costuming, nice effects.


Lady Punisher Ii by xavix- Great costuming, as always. Never will understand the appeal of a "Lady Punisher," though.

Elektra by anaque- Nice drawing. She looks sad though. What's the story?

Trinity by Captain Sigma- Makes a Trinity movie look almost workable. Nice job.

Ra's Al Ghul by Mattomb82- Nice pic. Good work on the hair.


The Dark Knight by DarrenJSeeley- Interesting.

Kymaera Again by Alchematrix- Good piece. Nice metal work and skin recolorization.

The Superman by marcushislop- A good tribute.

Blink by Lushy- Lushy's back! And working with some new tecniques, it looks like. Nice!



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Funniest thing I've ever said unintentionally:
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Junkyard
10-15-2004, 10:33 AM
By the way, for those not in the U.S, the expression, "Your barn door is open" refers to a person's zipper. I don't know if that's a universal thing.

[This message has been edited by Junkyard (edited 10-15-2004).]

Jedi Knight Pas-Jo D
10-15-2004, 11:18 AM
Arch Enemies: Part 4 by Junkyard- This is freaking hilarious. Great job man!

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Junkyard
10-15-2004, 01:25 PM
Thanks! The positive feed back on thses things is making me more confident in the jokes to follow.

dperceful
10-15-2004, 05:41 PM
aint nobody better: wow, i remember that series. i never watched it....but the sad part is, i would know the answer if a trivia question were asked. i would go for a better, higher quality base pic...something clean. as always...nice effort.

scarlet witch: nice cape, i like the short cape look.

bloodstorm: what's up with the lines? sorry i'm not familiar with the character so i don't know if the lines represent something or not.

jsa: ha! sticks would love this. this is a great series. i love that lead arm on sandman, the folds of the jacket are beautiful.

jack in the box: wouldn't the grand prize game be much more interesting when a clown like this hosted it? if anyone gets that reference, you get a prize. nice work, i olve th costuming...the highlights on the black are very well done.

arch enemies: captain planet...omg, that was the worst cartoon ever...it was like a blue billy ray cyrus. nice work...great series.

dawnstar: very cool. some awesome work....this series of manips is such a wonderful addition to the gallery. costuming is always top notch on these....i wish i could do this good.

hex: with that strong power source on her hand....maybe whip up some lighting on the costume, right now it seems too dark.

punisher: no art notes.

Elektra: cool. nice work on the pants. the hair seems like it's one piece, it just doesn't flow. try taking a look at my hair tutorial in the Art School...it might be helpful.

trinity: supes is just too pixelly, i would go for a better base on him. i like the layout of characters. maybe tighten the piece up a little.

Ra's al Ghul: very nice. welcome to the DCG, nice casting choice too.

dk: watch your shadows...this one is giving off a slight bevel effect. again unique styles make for interesting takes on characters.

Kymaera again: a much better revisit. i think the metal looks fine...it's hard to perfect. check out my tutorial in the art school on metal...just one way of many to do a metal effect.

the superman: the title says it all, he is "the" superman. he wil be missed by all.

lushy: no art notes. interesting...i can see the selection "ants."

dan

Biohaz_Daddy
10-15-2004, 07:16 PM
Ain't NoBody Better by MaidenRaine1300
Your results are similar to what you were doing with the X-kids. Good concepts all, but still in need of better software.

Scarlet Witch by Majik1387
I like the idea. The eyes are very striking. The rest is just undefined. The idea and the eyes make up for a lot to me though. Good job.

BloodStorm by DarkElektraPhoenix
This one shows good improvement overall. The use of line and color are much better than your previous work. I still suggest that you spend some time on drawing anatomy.

JSA 6 by MysticMorgan
First I have to say that I love how you have captured the feel of the era. This one more than any of the others demonstrates an understanding of the retro elements in the design.

Jack In The Box - Astro City by QuantumFX
This is my favorite of what I have seen of your work (yes I do visit Heromorph). You have captured the character perfectly.

Arch Enemies: Part 4 by Junkyard
This just gets better and better. My sons and I watch the updates as they happen and were laughing out loud at this installment. Who would have guessed that my nemesis was Capt. Planet? And then there’s Droppo. http://www.comics2film.com/UBB/biggrin.gif

LSH – Dawnstar by MilleniumBum
Very beautiful… The only problem is the wings. It doesn’t look as though you have done much to them. Everything else is so nearly perfect they really stand out.

ORIGINALCONCEPT: HEX by show_u_who_i_am
Good effects, especially the eyes… The costuming is good, but a little basic. The wrist band looks as though it is made of a flexible material which may or may not be what you intended. If it is it worked.

Lady Punisher II by xavix
The matrix meets the punisher meets the Brady bunch staircase meets Battlezone meets peekaboo fashions. Well done and enigmatic.

Elektra by anaque
You have some real basic problems with proportions and anatomy. You are further advanced with the coloring and shading, which look good here.

Trinity by Captain Sigma
Bats and Wondy both look pretty good, but Supes is just creepy. I know you don’t like it, but this version of Wondy does resemble her Superfriends counterpart. It’s a combination of the skin tone, eye makeup and coloring, and the primary colors used.

Ra's al Ghul by Mattomb82
Good casting and some convincing eyebrows. The gray hair looks a little glued on, but overall a good piece.

The Dark Knight by DarrenJSeeley
I like the interplay between the bat symbol and signal with the bright blues. Also with the relative simplicity of his face it gives the impression of youthful less world weary Batman. The side of his face completely in shadow and the red eye foreshadow the darker side yet to fully manifest in the young hero. Or this is just a cool little pic of Batman that I am over analyzing.

Kymaera again by Alchematrix
This is very nice, polished piece.

THE Superman by marcushislop
Nice work and sentiment.

Blink by Lushy
Overall this is pretty flat, but since I can’t tell how this was done and since you left no art notes I will just say… nice.

Junkyard
10-15-2004, 08:55 PM
<BLOCKQUOTE><font size="1" face="Verdana, Arial">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by dperceful:
<B>arch enemies: captain planet...omg, that was the worst cartoon ever...it was like a blue billy ray cyrus. nice work...great series.
</B><HR></BLOCKQUOTE>

Well, the cartoon WAS mediocer, but as a card carrying member of both the Audubon Society and the Arbor Day Foundation, I'm a bit on Billy Ray Planet's side. I think it'll end up making for a couple of good jokes later on.

And I'm glad you guys like it!

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Junkyard, Proud Defender of This Nation's Garbage Dumps.

Funniest thing I've ever said unintentionally:
"Prosecutors will be violated."

B
10-15-2004, 11:45 PM
I had an hour's free time, so why not?

Ain't Nobody Better by MaidenRaine1300
Aside for the pixellation of the base pic (which you probably can't do much about), this is quite good, especially for Paint. You guys do really good work for that app, I must. I don't think I've ever actually said that before. I'd still look into upgrading though, there are free apps out there with quite a good set of features... GIMP comes to mind.

Scarlet Witch by Majik1387
Cool design, decent pic. Bits are very blurry, especially the pentagram and tiara. The edges are a bit messy as well. I like it overall though.

Bloodstorm by DarkElektraPhoenix
Cool pose, nice drawing, probably your best to date. Anatomy's a bit wonky, and the lines are distracting. I'm not sure what they're supposed to be (unless they're just the unfortunate side-effect of having drawn on a ruled page, in which I'd suggest using blank paper!), but I'm sure there's a better way to do the effect. But again, this is a nice drawing overall.

Jsa 6 by MysticMorgan
You kidding man? These are better than some of my finished pics. This is probably the weakest, cause of the lack of detail in various things -- the shut door in the far background, her hair, that really wispy smoke -- but it's still great. I particularly love the mask.

Jack In The Box - Astro City by QuantumFX
Damn! Very nice piece. I love the fur and mask, and the main part of the costume. The fur is particularly awesome, wow. That said, I come bearing nitpicks... first, the highlights on the black are 90% gorgeous, but they're just a bit too hazy and blurry for my taste. The various additions, the discs and the wrist-things, are really flat, they completely lack the more complex shading of the rest of the pic. Stick out like a sore thumb, I'm sorry to say. Still, a damn nice piece overall. Oh, and Astro City rules.

Arch Enemies: Part 4 by Junkyard
I'm loving this series! I mean... Captain Planet... Bill Nye... 'nuff said. I just wish I were in it. http://www.comics2film.com/UBB/smile.gif

Lsh - Dawnstar by MilleniumBum
Absolutely, drop-dead, five stars gorgeous. I mean, WOW. This may be the hottest Dawnie I've ever seen, and that includes Serayala's version from a couple years back. The costuming's basically perfect (love the redesign, BTW), the accessories are great, cool background. The only problem is the blurry wings. A huge thumbs up, and my favourite pic of the day.

Originalconcept: Hex by show_u_who_i_am
Cool concept, nice power effects (though the specific pattern of the light around her hand is weird for some reason), rather painty costuming. And like Dan said, some lighting on the costume would be good.

Lady Punisher Ii by xavix
No art notes = no UIR.

Elektra by anaque
A game of two halves. The drawing overall is nice, the costume is beautiful, I love the highlights and wrinkles on the pants. The skin tone's rather flat in comparison, and I agree with Dan about the hair and with Biohaz about the anatomy.

Trinity by Captain Sigma
The lighting and picture quality are all over the place. Particularly, Supes' costume is really blurry. Can't really add anything else to what the others said.

Ra's Al Ghul by Mattomb82
Welcome to the DCG! Very good debut. The eyebrows and eyes are very nice, though the beard-thingies and white streaks in the hair are really blurry and like Biohaz said, pasted-on looking.

The Dark Knight by DarrenJSeeley
Good piece. The folds of the cape are great. You've a very unique (and cool) style, though I still think your work is generally a bit too blurry. Not much I can add to what the others said, except that the edges of the bat-logo are way too sharp to fit in with the remainder of the pic.

Kymaera Again by Alchematrix
Cool piece. Great recolour, though a touch monochrome. Very nice costuming, the metal really looks quite good. Not perfect, but very nice. The hair's kinda clumpy.

The Superman by marcushislop
Amen. THE Superman. Very nice piece as well, as usual.

Blink by Lushy
No art notes = no UIR.

Captain Sigma
10-16-2004, 08:22 PM
<BLOCKQUOTE><font size="1" face="Verdana, Arial">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by Biohaz_Daddy:
<B>Trinity by Captain Sigma
Bats and Wondy both look pretty good, but Supes is just creepy. I know you don’t like it, but this version of Wondy does resemble her Superfriends counterpart. It’s a combination of the skin tone, eye makeup and coloring, and the primary colors used.</B><HR></BLOCKQUOTE>

I don't mind one bit about the Superfriends comparison. In fact, your comment is where I got the idea for the tagline. So thanks. http://www.comics2film.com/UBB/smile.gif



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