KLA 1
04-20-2005, 12:16 AM
Teen Titans: Cyborg ......... I like the idea you had here, but the metal looks too blurry.
Mary Marvel Rain..... Bust line is a bit dark, and you have some conflicting shadows, but otherwise looks good.
Eternals 2 ................... Too much gray for my taste. I leave the rest for an anime fan.
Last sons ................. Good sketch
Super Sexy Supergirl ................ Blurry costume. The water color look does not work for me. I get the intent with the eyes, but it could use some work to make them look less like blobs in her face.
Ben Grimm .............. Good job. Reminds me of General Patton and Sgt Fury with that pose.
Nell Mcandrew as Harley Quinn............ This layout looks good but the trimming on her needs to be tighter so the last of her base photo is gone. As is, it is distracting. I suggest too, that you add wrinkles and seams to the body sit so it looks more like clothes and less like colored skin. More in your art notes could better tell us your intent and so better help with suggestions.
Mulletman ............. “Contrast the difference?” Actually more contrast is exactly what this image seems to need. Might I suggest more, smaller, frames to move your story along? You seem to be losing your audience due to story pacing.
Mary Jane......... Cool poster look.
Wonder Woman ............. Your artwork looks better than the model here. Her face is somewhat skewed here somehow. Your gold work, even the off-centered tiara, looks great. The shorts could use some shading, and the left side of the belt needs some thickening rather than sharing the edge line with her body.
Rocinate ...........Inappropriate costume. Can’t see the JLA allowing her around in that outfit. ...
Good artwork, except that I cannot see how her left arm would be visible this way, and have her cape flowing forward t the angle shown. I sense a physics problem here.
Captain Planet ......... Some color problems with your blues on Capt. But great casting in my mind as his Macgiver character was a conservationist type.
Eternals part 1........Too much gray behind the pastels for my taste. I prefer more contrast, but that’s me. I leave the rest for an anime fan.
Starfire............ Cool look. Good job. Did you make the background?
Batrogueventriloquist ....... Good sketch work and coloring.
May have missed some from the 4/17/2005 Gallery, but have to go.
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Seeking the black and white of truth, while treading along in a grayscale world.
[This message has been edited by KLA 1 (edited 04-24-2005).]
Mary Marvel Rain..... Bust line is a bit dark, and you have some conflicting shadows, but otherwise looks good.
Eternals 2 ................... Too much gray for my taste. I leave the rest for an anime fan.
Last sons ................. Good sketch
Super Sexy Supergirl ................ Blurry costume. The water color look does not work for me. I get the intent with the eyes, but it could use some work to make them look less like blobs in her face.
Ben Grimm .............. Good job. Reminds me of General Patton and Sgt Fury with that pose.
Nell Mcandrew as Harley Quinn............ This layout looks good but the trimming on her needs to be tighter so the last of her base photo is gone. As is, it is distracting. I suggest too, that you add wrinkles and seams to the body sit so it looks more like clothes and less like colored skin. More in your art notes could better tell us your intent and so better help with suggestions.
Mulletman ............. “Contrast the difference?” Actually more contrast is exactly what this image seems to need. Might I suggest more, smaller, frames to move your story along? You seem to be losing your audience due to story pacing.
Mary Jane......... Cool poster look.
Wonder Woman ............. Your artwork looks better than the model here. Her face is somewhat skewed here somehow. Your gold work, even the off-centered tiara, looks great. The shorts could use some shading, and the left side of the belt needs some thickening rather than sharing the edge line with her body.
Rocinate ...........Inappropriate costume. Can’t see the JLA allowing her around in that outfit. ...
Good artwork, except that I cannot see how her left arm would be visible this way, and have her cape flowing forward t the angle shown. I sense a physics problem here.
Captain Planet ......... Some color problems with your blues on Capt. But great casting in my mind as his Macgiver character was a conservationist type.
Eternals part 1........Too much gray behind the pastels for my taste. I prefer more contrast, but that’s me. I leave the rest for an anime fan.
Starfire............ Cool look. Good job. Did you make the background?
Batrogueventriloquist ....... Good sketch work and coloring.
May have missed some from the 4/17/2005 Gallery, but have to go.
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Seeking the black and white of truth, while treading along in a grayscale world.
[This message has been edited by KLA 1 (edited 04-24-2005).]