View Full Version : UIR: cheesecake: She-Hulk by jferro1978
09-26-2005, 01:22 AM
Comments for UIR: <b> cheesecake</b>: She-Hulk by jferro1978 (http://www.comics2film.com/DCG/DispArt.php3?f_id=18805)
Pretty good. Nice drawing (though the nose should probably have a bit more detail... and the shape of the head generally seems a bit off, though I'll leave the more detailed critique to people who can draw and know something about anatomy), and nice colours. The background doesn't quite work... based on the "satin sheets" feel, I assume it's supposed to look like she's lying on a bed. (If not, feel free to ignore the next few sentences) But since the shapes in the background are entirely random and don't flow the way they would if that actually *was* a bed she was lying on, it's rathr too obvious that it's just a drawing superimposed on a background... you'd probably have been better off actually drawing the sheets (maybe using your reference photo as a guide, if possible), then doing some filters in Elements to create the shine, if you so wanted. Still, a nice pic.
09-26-2005, 09:43 PM
This is a definitely a nice piece and a pretty good drawing.
I can't get into serious detail since I can't really draw either but I have to agree with B on the face.
The one thing that stands out on her face is for me is that the screen left cheek is very angular the way you have it colored and the screen right cheek is very rounded in comparison.
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