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10-17-2005, 09:33 PM
Comments for UIR: Teen Titans: The Movie - Starfire by effektdmentality (http://www.comics2film.com/DCG/DispArt.php3?f_id=18908)
10-17-2005, 09:36 PM
Not a bad piece and I've always thought getting a good color on Starfire's skin is a tough challenge.
With the exception of some rough edges (the screen left hand, and the bottom of the shirt), and the hair being a bit flat I don't have much more to suggest to change.
The one other little thing is the placement of the skirt is really a bit low. Where it sits now it wouldn't stay there because her hipbones are above where its hanging. ;)
Nice work. I'm liking this series. There's not much I can add to Shay's comments. The skin's not perfect... I'd personally darken the shadows a bit... but orange skin must be a right rhymes-with-ditch to get right... it would naturally tend towards far brighter-looking shadows than are possible in real life.
Cool background, though I'd get rid of the lens flares. (I'm biased, I hate the damn things :D) Also, I'd redo the power effect (I assume) around her hand along the lines of Dan's tutorial in the art school... the standard green glow could easily be improved upon.
10-18-2005, 01:14 AM
thanks for the input. the shadows on the skin do look a little bright to me. and yeah, the power sig needs work. i dunno, i'm not particularly happy with this as much as the raven piece. oh well.
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