|06-29-2007, 12:45 AM||#1|
Join Date: Jun 2007
I did not write a preview, and sorry about that so you will have no clue about the character and story but don't worry the second book preview, although the future superhero name is Solar Ego, i really hope he gets into comics and they make movies about him....
Well here it is the story.
The Amazing Shadow
April 14, 1990
From out of the sky of Andres, a jolt of lightning soars out of the mist of the clouds.
“Are you sure you want to do this?”
“Yes master I do.”
Meanwhile, Johnny a ten-year old boy searching around for his friend Eddie at the park.
“Johnny, I’m over here!”
“OH EDDIE!, WHATS UP!”
“John, watch out!” yelled Eddie.
“WHAT IS IT!?!?!”
The jolt of lightning strikes Johnny. A flash of blinding white light explodes before Eddie.
“AHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!” hollers Johnny.
“Johnny!!!, SOMEBODY HELP! “
“4 Years later…”
April 14, 1994
“Wake up sleepy head… WAKE UP!”
“Alright Lisa, you know sometimes I don’t even know you… Sometimes I think your dumb…”
“WHAT DID YOU SAY?!”
“Nothing, don’t make me wake up mom and dad.”
John decides to phone his friend Eddie. He begins to dial the number but notices something strange. A mysterious man is walking outside in his front yard.
“Johnny, I need you to do that thing you can do to heat my pizza.”
“Look Lisa, I can make lightning and control the weather but I am not a chef.”
“Kids what are you doing?” their mom asked.
“oh… hi mom!” Lisa and John answered.
“Where’s dad, mom?” John questioned.
Outside the house Johnny sees strange shadows, moving all over the place. John looks closer, closer and he sees that they are fast and they look like ghosts, possibly phantoms….
He runs outside of this house and searches for the phantoms seemingly haunting his family house. Left, right every direction but they seemed to be gone forever. As he was walking up to his house he heard noises from the leafs near the bushes, like someone was stepping on it. Crunch, Crunch, Crunch! He turns around in terror but as he turns around nothing is surrounding him, so he continues walking up to his house door. He trips over his bike and he falls on the hard gravel. He looks at the ground and sees shadows on the ground. He turns his head back really fast and sees a dark figure standing right in front of him.
“What the…” John blurts.
Right after he gets knocked out by the shadow and is taken to a mysterious location to parts unknown.
John wakes up from being out cold and finds out he is trapped somewhere near a city of lights. He looks around and that’s all he sees, blurry lights. He uses his lightning abilities to get out of the chains. He throws down the chains in fury. He finds a way out of the area, but soon founds out there is more… It is a maze. One move wrong and he is lost forever. He walks around searching for a way out. He then remembers he possesses weather power and he can fly. He floats up and thinks he has escaped but as he floats up he see the thing being revealed. A gigantic maze appears in Johnny’s Surprised eyes.
He then found the ending of the maze and flies out. He gets near the ending but a black shadow pops out and attacks John out of the sky.
He falls down to earth but still fights he punches and kicks the unknown shadow away from him. John quickly flies away and escapes the maze safety and wonders why he is being stocked, Meanwhile Mom and Lisa are worried sick and phone every rescue team. Soon the whole city of Andres searches for Johnny Cooper.
“WHO ARE YOU, WHY ARE YOU DOING THIS” shouts Johnny. The mystery shadow does not answer and stocks Johnny. “ THERES ALWAYS A CHANCE TO CHANGE!” yells John. “not always…” replies the shadow. John does a strange face and flies away into the clouds.
“master…….” “Did you get the boy” “no he got away.” “AWAY!!!!! Jolt you have failed me for the last time, you should of kept your powers instead of giving it to that boy, he now possess ultimate power!, soon he will take over earth itself! Find him this is your last mission!” Jolt then flies away and accepts his masters request. “This is too easy…….” Laughs The Master.
“Are you ok Johnny” “Yah I am fine Mom don’t worry about me just worry about the shadow that is STOCKING ME!” Meanwhile the Jolt continues to search. Jolt spots John walking in the streets of Andres. Shadow flies next to Johnny. Johnny turns around and begins to fight Jolt. Right Punch, Left Punch, Right Kick, Left Kick, Right elbow and then throws a lightning bolt at Shadow. The bolt goes right through Jolt and Jolt charges at Johnny. They fly well they are attacking either. Johnny does not stop fighting and knocks out Jolt. Jolt goes flying into the shopping mall. Punch, kick. “AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH” scares an old lady. “Um……. I need to help her.” asks Johnny
“Oh, Ok then I’ll wait” replies Jolt. After Johnny saves her they stop for a few seconds so Johnny can save the old lady. They resume after she is out of the mall. They begin to fight again. Outside the mall, Punch, kick, slap, jump kick, but Johnny and Jolt dodge each others attack and fail to defeat either. Attack after attack.
“JOHNNY” yells Lisa. Johnny looks at Lisa and yells back ’Lisa run” as he turns his head he looks back at Jolt and Jolt then upper-cuts Johnny. Johnny falls to the ground and Jolt files away with Johnny in the air, Lisa looks up and sees Jolt and Johnny disappear.
“Sir I am back with good news” “you got the boy, good.”
“yes you got the boy” “yes master I do” “is The Boy Awake Yet?” As they speak John wakes up from his attack. He listens closely but Jolt realizes Johnny is awake and so he walks straight up to Johnny and looks eye to eye with him.
“Welcome Back Johnny” Johnny looks at Jolt. “LET ME GO!” hollers Johnny. “I can’t do that It wait I can, you have no powers hahaha, this is great.” Johnny stares at Jolt and yells “HELP ME, SOMEBODY HELP ME!”
“no one can hear you, this is far away from Andres, Johnny SHOUT AS LOUD AS YOU WANT NO ONE WILL HEAR YOU!”.
“Then can I ask you something
“Who The Heck Are You and why are you capturing me?” Johnny asks and Jolt Replies “Haha, I can‘t tell you why you’re here but guess who am I, come on guess.…… “My enemy” Replies Johnny. “ Wrong, here is the best most coolest answer……, I am your worst nightmare……………”
To Be Continued……………….
10 Books will be made, and yes it is one of thoughts short story, but now in days the comics are short too so this is just like a book a.k.a comic.
Thanks for reading and yes there will be a preview for the second book.
June 28th 2007.
|06-29-2007, 10:19 AM||#2|
Aspiring to appear on "When Animals attack!"
Join Date: May 2005
Well, it's nice that you decided to premiere your character on here, but really, this forum is for discussing books (like Harry Potter or biographies, stuff like that), but this sounds like it'll be right at home with the stuff over on the storyboard, so I'll be moving this right over there soon.
|06-29-2007, 12:09 PM||#3|
Join Date: Jun 2007
Alright thanks, i already got the second preview done....... though it will have spoilers so maybe you should just read the pages, characters, and the plot and setting.
Darkness Will Takeover.
and yes it is turning a bit darker every story.